My feedback thread

[Tomtomrawr]

So, welcome. If you are actually looking in here, I thank you. I write very few stories, and characters come and go regularly, so I have very few stories. But if you wish to read any, I would very much appreciate it. I would appreciate it even more if you read one, or all if you have time, and then post your opinion here.

Again, I appreciate it.

The Personality Dysfunction series:

Chapter One: The Concealed Foes - The characters are introduced and plans begin to form.

Chapter Two: The Armoured Mind - Macdeath's somewhat copyrighted plan is revealed and his allies and enemies are shown.

Chapter Three: The Artificial Entity - Macdeath begins his assault whilst his "allies" prove troublesome. He faces an unfortunate death.

Other work:

The Ancient Madness - Another entity stored in a similar device to that of Macdeath, this is the story of its beginnings.

The Genetic Madman - The next man in the bloodline of a family known for their insanity.

John Mantral, the Story of a Rogue - My old Liberty Rogue character. Rather short unfortunately.

What a Wonderful World... - Joint role-play between me and Vrouw, a Phantom and my old Bounty Hunter having a nice dinner.

So, have fun, and I hope you like my stories.

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[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.

Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.