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[Shryke]

Interesting idea. One flaw I see in it though.

I thought it was common knowledge among the Sairs and Casts that the Coalition sabotaged it. Anyway, I don't think realizing the Coalition blew up the Hispania is enough to reconcile the differences between the Outcasts and Corsairs. These are people that have been at each other's throats for centuries. That doesn't go away so easily. Especially people as hard as the two groups. Besides, I was always under the impression that the rift between the Corsairs and Outcasts happend after the Hispania was disabled, not during or before. I'm not so sure that it has anything to do with it.

You would have to do a lot more work leading up to this event, in my opinion. For it to just happen out of the blue seems a little lazy. Granted its hypothetical, but if you really worked at the history of such a move, not so much waiting for the reaction, it would be received a lot better.

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