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The presence of the Havoc Mk II makes me a little confused (given normal equipment protocol, anyway), but I'll let you explain that.

The Clydesdale, Percheron, and Shire are all absolute monsters. The Dromedary and BWT are more tradeships than combat vessels, while the Bretonian transports all have the armor to fight and the firepower to make enemies cry. Especially the Shire. Oh god, the Shire.

Aside from the minor tweaks to the shiplist, you've certainly done your homework. Question, though- while you might not be directly under the authority of a Commodore, would you be under the authority of, say, the Fleet Admiral? Your top rank is Vice-Admiral, which makes me think that at some point you do rejoin the main command structure (which would make sense, given your deployment and purpose). Where does this occur?

Aside from a few questions and tweaks, this looks very good. I'm interested in seeing how you'll work ingame. See you in space.

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