HAF Officialization Request

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1. Get someone to go through your entire post and correct spelling and grammar mistakes. Pay them if neccessary. Also tidy up formatting to make it more presentable if you want this to be your official faction status. I know it sounds petty but at present it reads quite horribly. Also, remove unneccessary information such as the massive list of all weapons that you allow, when you could simply say "all corsair, order or universal Sirius guns"

2. Check over your zone of operations; for instance Salisbury, Londonderry and Orkney I would definitely consider outside of the corsair ZOI and would query the sanity of any corsair pilot present there.

3. Maybe you ought to consider condensing your history to make it more readable, or putting it elsewhere via a link and instead inserting a clearer mission statement about what the HAF does on a daily basis which differentiates it from the other corsair factions.

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Sir Stanley Nelson




<span style="color:#000066">Charles Canning </span><span style="color:#000066"> Foreign Secretary</span>