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The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread

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01-11-2010, 10:59 PM,

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Yar, so as the title suggests, constructive criticism and suggestions are welcome, but please don't come in here just to tell me you hated my story and I'm a crappy writer xD

Here's the link to the story, in case you find this thread before finding the story: http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...mp;#entry865498

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The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by Sarawr!? - 01-11-2010, 10:59 PM

The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by Akura - 01-11-2010, 11:07 PM

The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by Zeltak - 01-11-2010, 11:08 PM

The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by Akura - 01-13-2010, 03:59 PM

The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by Saronsen - 01-14-2010, 01:59 AM

The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by jimmy Patterson - 01-14-2010, 10:09 PM

The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by Sarawr!? - 01-15-2010, 02:38 AM

The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by SimonBlack - 01-15-2010, 03:36 PM

The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by Sarawr!? - 01-15-2010, 10:20 PM

The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by Kazinsal - 01-18-2010, 08:03 PM

The Queen's Demise, Feedback thread - by Crysis - 01-24-2010, 02:20 PM

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