The Bretonian Citizens Army

[Serpentis]

Although the Sabre is used mostly by outlaws, it still is considered an allowed/tolerated piece of equipment, tasked for tolerating the harsh circumstances of the Border Worlds for those who are not affiliated with any of their inhabitants. A civilian vessel, used away from house space.

You can stay with the Eagle regardless, it's a fine ship aswell and yeah... more civilian in a sense.
The concept of the faction is great, however there's one thing I'd like to suggest:

Focus on internal tasks more throughoutly, rather than throwing yourself into the frontlines. The BAF are away from home, so the level of internal security also drops. Thus, I suggest that you put fighting terrorism in priority and Kusarians secondary. I would imagine the tasking as this:

The BAF fights the war on the Leeds front, holding back the invaders, basically doing most of the war themselves.
The QCP disrupts the enemy supply lines.
And the Militia secures the internal territories of Bretonia, whilst the BAF/BPA is busy with the war.

Basically, you would be defending your homes as citizens. No reason to wander into the Taus for example, there's the QCP for that.

THIS!

Is excatly what I was thinking, thank you, and yes, I think that the BM will concentrate on protecting the core systems and planets, against those threats that break trough.

I think this will work out well.

Thank you for your comments, it gave me much to work on, in a positive way:)

Right now, Ive made the BM try to be everywhere at one time, that wont work. So im going to rework some of the ideas in being a core systems militia, protecting the planets and such.


And, someone mentioned X-Shuttle, I can add it. It is civilian indeed and sold on Harris so it fits.

Thanks so far, keep the ideas and suggestions comming

Edit: I will consider adding the Sabre, maybe even open up relations with the Outcasts, asking for some of their sabres, as it is after all civilians using them.

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