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Conquistador story

The story relates the tale of Cayetano Sanchez (who's actual latest descendent is Rita Sanchez, a small outcast noble), Conquistador under the command of Hernan Cortez, during his years in the Yucatan and fighting the Aztec empire. I do not claim the story to be historically correct, because it isn't. I don't know much about Hernan's Cortez conquest of the Yucatan, but as I write my story, I write Cayetano's point of view about the major events of it. As you can see, I try to add some... mystic in it, you'll see how it turns out over time. XP

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