Feedback on Guidance

[Corsair]

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=64631

I've been playing the STALKER games for a bit more than two years now. This is my story of a stalker in 2010, one of the first thousand stalkers to come to the Zone. I base the lore of the story off of what I've seen and heard in-game.

I've been told that I make some grammar mistakes in all of my stories, but that's just because I write too fast. I try and correct the ones I see, but if you could help me, I'd appreciate it.

Also, I write a lot. So.. Be ready. People usually tell me they like my stories, and that only makes me want to write more and more.

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