' Wrote:Looks good, I made a couple of small changes including capitalizing the name in the page title as well as putting all the history sections in one main section to differentiate them from the personality section. You could squeeze a few more links in there as well, perhaps to the LSF player faction and maybe one to the kind of ship she first flew. But yeah, overall, very nice.
Nice one, looks alot better now. I was half asleep when I did it. The first ship she flew was a battered old eagle. I would love to edit the =LSF= player faction but, dunno if its the same principal in doing a player.