Zoey Sakura, feedback thread

[Akura]

I'm glad you bring that up Bacon, something I plan to work on when I story out her time in the FA.


She spent six years in the Farmers Alliance being treated like crap.

After making a Griffin space worthy, she pretty much followed them about and acted as their bitch until about two years in when she actually go some shots at real combat. She's treated even worse because of her being half-Bretonian, so after the six years of proving herself, she eventually got a break.

Miyagi Ochi, the current leader of the AFA (mang109) likes her, he is less traditional I suppose, but he is one of the main reasons she managed to gain independance.

She was never allowed to join the AFA, due to her half-blood and gender, but she's such a strong figure after her six years of bad treatment, she ignores their abuse, verbal and occasionally physical.


This is her main reasoning for not continuing operations with the FA, as they would not let her work as she does now, under their command. She instead does her own thing and keeps her distance, and due to figures like Miyagi Ochi, less traditional ones at least, she is able to get what she needs and not be murdered in an allyway or something.

In Diary Entry #22, Zelot's FA was particuarly venomous towards her. This behavior I expect and welcome, as it's realistically how about 90% of the FA would feel about her.

I will detail out in stories to come, her treatment in school as a girl and as a half-blood, and I plan to detail some of her time in the six years she spend building up character before she finally decided to leave and go independant.
It will not be pretty, she wasn't treated at all like a princess, I assure you.

All in all, it is one of the main motivations of my desire to eventually request a Terrorist ID for Zoey, with an Alliance IFF. She is not a Gaian, or Hogosha, Alliance or Corsair, she is independant, this is her quest for independance anyway, and it's going quite well.
With the Terrorist ID though, she won't change at all. Her behavior will be the same, her actions and goals and allies and feelings will all stay exactly the same.

I'm willing to accept the concequences of her background, if the AFA leadership changes, and a more traditional leader steps in, she will have to deal with the new problems that arise.

She is loyal to Kusari, and loves it dearly, a patriot, but she is also an outsider, not be her own choosing. And she has to deal with it.


Make sense?

It's not implausable, it's just very unlikely, and very difficult for her.



My Avatar, I like because it's my avatar, she's not meant to be portrayed as a whore, or even as Zoey, I just like the expression and it never fails to cheer me up or make me smile.

In the full picture, she is cutting cake xD