A mind adrift, personal logs of a SCRA soldier

[chovynz]

I love it!
Having the computer acknowledge you is a nice touch.
The whole thing is creative! Good work!

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More volume!
Equalise the sounds. Computer acknowledgements is hard to hear. People can't see you, so it's no prob to be visually messy, as long as the sound is clear. Make your recording, then edit it in Audacity or something, to manually add the computer acknowledgments with good voluming. Post-processing. Then you can also probably add other thigns too.

Be your character, sometimes it sounds like you are reading a script (which you probably are) but for audio stuff, it's important to sound like you ARE Ivan Rasputin. If you can get into a position e.g. if angry, stand up. If relaxed sit down.

Your posture comes through the audio.
If you can manage it, I'd suggest you get either a head-mic, or a long extension cord so that you can act physically while reading your scripts.

Suggestion : if you don't already, write down your stuff.

#3 Make your audio logs short. To the point. A mind adrift, at the moment certainly, is adrift. Shorten your focus, if you understand what I mean.

#4243 It sounds like you are in a giant room, with the reverb happening there. Is there any way you can make it not so echoey?

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Good work dude.
I'm looking forward to more.

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Seek fun and you shall find it. Seek stuff to Q_Q about and you'll find that, too. I choose to have fun.