'Handsome' Steve Holloway Feedback thread

[Ryummel]

Well, well... I started with this char as a pie-rat in Omega 3, then, switched to Mercenary around Bretonia with Heraklion's char (Shizuma). From here, I started to develop the background of this lad in the wiki and finally, focused on developing the in-forum RP.

Here are the most relevant links:
Wiki page
Steve's diary: Random encounters, improvised plot, etc...

Events in chronological order:
Steve 'meets' Shizuma
Shizuma gets angry and flies back to Kusari
Zoey and Steve's night in
'Gift' sent to Vixen
Venge contacts Steve
Paving the Way, encounter in Freeport 2 with Venge

So... Feel free to give constructive criticism. ("You damn spaniard, go learn english" is also accepted xD )

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