Some feed back on the concepts ofthis story I'm setting up.

[Colonel Z.e.r.o.]

Miles ahead of you. Lenox Casper Will be his name a full blooded, first Osiris class Asarian. Adopted under pressing circumstances which are as following"

His mother, a peasant girl turned activist/terrorist, eventually fled to become a Qurytan Ziryha. After being accompanied by two second Osiris class soldiers as well as her elder sister and younger sister. Some years had past and she had two children with the soldier she met Lenox and his older sister.

Soon after the younger sibling, angry, confused, and alone, slowly befriends the other soldier that accompanied them has inadvertently made the ideal blind spot for a manipulative and ambitious ambassador for the Empire. He states subtly that unless certain measure are made her, her love, her family, and her desire to build her own family will not suffice unless other elements are removed. Elements such as key persons, technology, and wisdom responsible the enormous power the Ziryha have and influence the Qurytans posses as a nomadic herd of explorers. This in turn leads to the downfall of many of the Qurytan fleets, and effectively strangle any positive influence the Qurytans had towards the Empire's future enemies. The younger siblings actions also lead to the rape and murder of the older sister. Lenox's mother confronts her sister with this revelation only to be blindly rebutted and then beaten nearly to death before subduing and leaving her crazed loved one to die (presumably).

Fleeing the the Empire's navy, she, her lover, and two children escape to the uninvolved states to hide out in peace. Along the way, her lover and daughter become separated from the continuing invasion. eventually making her way into her son's future stepfather's ship. Where was eventually crippled by persistent Imperial stowaways which forced the ship and her into such extreme circumstances, she had to nearly kill herself to keep them at bay. When the authorities came to assist the distressed vessel in question, they came with a very cold and confidential purpose. Which was to take Lenox and his mother's body to be questioned and examined. Instead the agents where informed it be best to leave the child in the hands of the captain and the supposed fate of Lenox's mother was kept from him. (I'm clouding this up purposely for a possible reconciliation of epic proportions.)

Back to Lenox, I'm too much of a lazy **** so I'll coply/paste an older post from years before which is really ****ed with.

Major Zero=Lenox Casper

The essential story is she's an officer from a long line of proud military history. Her country along with others similar to ones today (RL wise) are at war with another country with people of Arab/African descent. these people use ideals and past dealings with other civilizations and races (like slavery and white devil concepts in order to dehumanize other ethnic groups and break down the sympathy the people of that nation have regarding starting a massive war with them) as propaganda to rally the government, military and population into a war of justice and claim the rightful dominance of the X nation (name pending). Due to both their population/economy and the vast amount of raw materials they have at their possession as well is their acquired ability to hunt so precisely within a nebula (which 40% of their home system is covered by and borders much like how the GMG was able to out smart the RM in the eighty) they were able to effectively hound and wear down the borders of other nations for years.

Somewhere else in another country allied to the char in question a Major Zero (acronym ofor his real name) is an adopted son of a famous Navy captain, he, frustrated with his boring life joins the navy. After several months of basic fight training he is assigned escort duties for 5 new experimental bipedal tanks (Xenopeds) Around the same time the X nation has agreed to sign a cease fire to end their bloody war with the other nations. However this is just a setup, thus necessitating the creation (or should I say reverse engineering is the case of these experimental of the Xenopeds). At the same time in the confusion Felyse on a patrol with her squadron his ambushed by several wings of attack fighters her fighter squadron with full intent of sacrificing themselves allow her to retreat to a nearby communications base she lands to make vital repairs and have the base crew relay a message to the nearest command installation. However almost seconds after she makes her landing a detachment from the X nation's bomber squadron manages take down most of the station's primary systems and compartments and killing almost everyone onboard.

Major Zero after having to land his fighter due to engine trouble lands back on the transport ship of the Xenopeds at that time his step-brother is as usual interrogating him in matters regarding his personal life and his plans for the future (future family, wife, kids, etc.) during which the ship alarms go off notifying the distress that a nearby comm station is in (the same one our heroine is on). The captain coldly ignores it and attempts to remain on course. Major Zero still young and confused about the duties of a soldier and more importantly, a man futility argues with the transport captain. After realizing there's no time to argue nor any point he rushes into the hangar to find an appropriate ship (seeing as his own was damaged to use to help rescue any survivors. There he discovers one of the 5 secret projects a black and yellow bipedal tank with two twin laser cannons mounted on it's back and laserblades on each arm. Painted on it's lower left leg is it's codename the "Black Sun". Ignoring the dammings from the transport captain Zero launches the machine and heads for the base at full speed.

Felyse also making an attemp to help any survivors still on board. She enters a room reserved for refugees and to her horror discovers the smoldering remians of a mother and infant. She colapses and throws up in disgust, disorented and shocked by her discovery (she's still a novice in many respects namely on the psychological level). she hurries back to the docking bay to escape but is thrown back by a subsystem explosion which colapses the ceiling crushing her shipp in the process tightly gripping the back of her head in pain she loses conscienceness. After finding a stable docking port he lands and begins to seach on foot for any survivors. Eventually he finds Felyse in another hangar just meters away from a light fighter crushed by rubble. Noting that had she been a bit hastier he would have needed a spatula to get her from out of that place. With an awkwardly admiring stare he reached down to grab her helpless body when her eyes opened to catch a glimpse of the man that saved her. Rushing back into the Xenoped he blasted his way out from the station into the vacuum where his step brother and fellow comrades were waiting with both pessimism and anticipation. While being scolded for his disobedience another fighter/bomber patrol jumps in to finish all remaining vessels in the area. His brother tells him to retreat to another sector to avoid being captured or scanned (his vessel is very top secret they wouldn't want it to fall into the wrong hands;)) reluctantly pulling away from the battlescene he looks from his rear monitor the bloody fight taking place.....

After successfully making it to an allied control nav point enforced by several cruisers and a battleship (Felyse's home base). In the confusion and of fighting off several fighter wings and attack vessel's the battlegroup completely unaware of both the existence of both a Xenoped of that caliber and it's standings begin to open fire on Major Zero, dealing relatively mild damage due to the advanced armor and shield systems. In an attempt to stop the onslaught he opens a comm. channel with the ship's captain to no avail, as that only entices the ship crews to continue their assault. (our hero is very similar to the enemy soldiers in terms of appearance dark skin, red eyes (an adaptation the people of the X nation underwent which actually makes the more distinguished from the regular non-X nation blacks and Arabs that are found in other settlements and back on earth) The shooting only comes to an end when the captain recognizes the woman lying in Zero's lap of which had saved earlier, his daughter. It's too late as the Major is knocked unconscience by the impacting shots.

The Felyse V Schneider chick still exist that but with a new name.

Then again, there are a few things that you might do well to expound upon, some of which I've listed above. As the author, its all up to you, but I found the most interesting parts of the story to revolve around the social implications of reintroducing one culture to others it had known before it took a transformative journey. Its sort of like the story of Moses, only on a much larger scale.

I can tell you this much. Which ever fame and love he acquire from his family and love interest, will be dashed and divided, through either manipulation, blackmail, or personal ineptitude. He'll end up somewhat like solid snake. 20 later a cool individual, constantly troubled by his past actions on top of how the events of his life made him see himself now as a natural murderer rather than a trained killer. Consistently haunted by situational metaphors which remind him of all the things he was "too weak" to do when he was younger. However can he make amends for his past?

P.S. worse synopsis ever I know CBF took me over, that and Madagascar 2.

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Nathan's Log || The "Real Story" of Lenox Casper