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[Mr.Fabulous]

This area shall contain my old RP.

Old RP 2

Victor Keys

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1. Character Sheet

1. Full Name: Victor Francis Keys
   
2. Birthday (Age): 14 June, 765 A.S. (58)
   
3. Species, Bio-gender, Socio-gender: Human, Male, D0
   
4. Hair Length, type, natural color, dye (optional): regulation cut, straight, greyish-white
   
5. (optional) Facial hair length, type, natural color, dye (optional): short, stuble, greyish-white
   
6. Skin Color: tan-white
   
7. Eye Color: pale blue
   
8. Height (cm), Weight (kg): 186cm, 108kg
   
9. Physical and Mental Quirks/Disabilities:
   
   1. left eye, scar, vertical
      
   2. nosebridge, scar, diagonal-right
      
   3. chest, scar, diagonal-left
      
   4. left arm, scar, vertical
      
10. Known Relatives:
    
    1. Mother: Leliana Francis
       
    2. Father: Markie Keys
       
    3. Youngersibling1: Margaret, Female
       
    4. Youngersibling2: Max, Male
       

2. Factions Involved in (chronological)

Liberty Navy Primary Fleet, circa 786 - Present

::::: Liberty Navy Primary Fleet :::::
>>> Captain <<<

1. Homegrown Daddy (still to be made)
   
2. Provin' Mah Colors (still to be made)
   
3. Heartbreak Road (still to be made)
   

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3. List of Ships

ship1

[LN]-LNS-Florida.Keys
Liberty "Griffin"-class Dreadnought

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4. Details:

(still to be made)

[LN]-LNS-Florida.Keys - Liberty "Griffin"-class BS

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Harriet Fieldson

1. Character Sheet

1. Full Name: Harrington Alleywalk Fieldson
   
2. Birthday (Age): 18 November, 785 A.S. (38)
   
3. Species, Bio-gender, Socio-gender: Human, Female, E0
   
4. Hair Length, type, natural color, dye (optional): medium, straight, brown
   
5. Skin Color: tan-white
   
6. Eye Color: light green
   
7. Height (cm), Weight (kg): 160cm, 58kg
   
8. Known Relatives:
   
   1. Mother: Belladonna Alleywalk
      
   2. Father: Harold Fieldson
      

2. Factions Involved in (chronological)

Liberty Navy Primary Fleet, circa 803 - Present

::::: Liberty Navy Primary Fleet :::::
>>> Admiral <<<

1. Daddy's "Guy" (still to be made)
   
2. Project: Marriet (still to be made)
   
3. Provin' Mah Colors (still to be made)
   
4. Heartbreak Road (still to be made)
   

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3. List of Ships

ship1

[LN]-Harriet.Fieldson
BDR-804 "Guardian" Liberty Very Heavy Fighter

ship2

[LN]-Harriet,Fieldson
LZF-9805 "Liberator" Liberty Light Fighter

ship3

[LN]-Harriet;Fieldson
BDR-804 "Guardian" Liberty Very Heavy Fighter

ship4

[LN]-LNS-Florida.Keys
Liberty "Griffin"-class Dreadnought

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4. Details:

(still to be made)

[LN]-Harriet.Fieldson - "Guardian" HF
[LN]-Harriet,Fieldson - "Liberator" LF
[LN]-Harriet;Fieldson - "Upholder" Bomber
[LN]-LNS-Florida.Keys - Liberty "Griffin"-class BS

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Keitaro Uzumaki

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1. Character Sheet

1. Full Name: Keitaro Sashima Uzumaki
   
2. Birthday (Age): 29 March, 800 A.S. (23)
   
3. Species, Bio-gender, Socio-gender: Human, Male, D0
   
4. Hair Length, type, natural color, dye (optional): crew cut, straight, black
   
5. Skin Color: light yellow
   
6. Eye Color: light brown
   
7. Height (cm), Weight (kg): 169cm, 85kg
   
8. Known Relatives:
   
   1. Mother: Chichi Sashima
      
   2. Father: Suzuki Uzumaki
      
   3. Eldersibling1: Chicho, Female
      

2. Factions Involved in (chronological)

Kusari State Police, circa 823 - Present

::::: Kusari State Police :::::
>>> Junsa <<<

1. Graveyard of the Chrysanthemums (still to be made)
   
2. Application
   
3. Police Reports
   

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3. List of Ships

ship1

KSP)KDS-Uzumaki
Kusari "Ashikaga"-class Gunboat

ship2

[KSP]Uzumaki.K[Junsa]
J7P - 34 "Wyrm" Kusari Navy Light Fighter

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4. Details:

(still to be made)

KSP)KDS-Uzumaki - "Ashikaga" GB
[KSP]Uzumaki.K[Junsa] - "Wyrm" LF

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Jaden Armand

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1. Character Sheet

1. Full Name: Jaden Anita Armand
   
2. Birthday (Age): 6 June, 786 A.S. (37)
   
3. Species, Bio-gender, Socio-gender: Human, Female, E2
   
4. Hair Length, type, natural color, dye (optional): long, straight, black
   
5. Skin Color: tan
   
6. Eye Color: green
   
7. Height (cm), Weight (kg): 179cm, 75kg
   
8. Physical and Mental Quirks/Disabilities:
   
   1. left eye, destroyed, cybernetically-replaced
      
   2. left arm, destroyed, cybernetically-replaced
      
   3. left leg, destroyed, cybernetically-replaced
      
   4. dermal hypersensitivity (static, dynamic, & thermal)
      
9. Known Relatives:
   
   1. Mother: Rosanna Anita (deceased)
      
   2. Father: Kamos Armand (deceased)
      

2. Factions Involved in (chronological)

Corsairs, circa 786 - 801 A.S.

::::: Imperio del Corsario :::::
>>> Scout <<<

1. The Ashen Maiden (still to be made)
   
2. First Betrayal's Always the Deepest (still to be made)
   

Bounty Hunters Guild, circa 801 - 804 A.S.

::::: Bounty Hunters Guild :::::
>>> Sidewinder <<<

1. The Serpent and the Bull (still to be made)
   
2. The Second I Turn My Back on You (still to be made)
   

Freelancer, circa 804 - 823

::::: Freelancer :::::
>>> Light Fighter Pilot <<<

1. Third Time's the Curse (still to be made)
   
2. A bouquet of disdain; A box of risky bets
   
3. How Love Blunders All...
   
4. The Fourth of Loss (still to be made)
   

Orbital Spa and Cruise, circa 823 - Present

::::: Orbital Spa and Cruise :::::
>>> Shipmaster <<<

1. Application
   
2. Fermi Paradox: Jaden Logs (still to be made)
   

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3. List of Ships

ship1

OSC|Vera.Cruz
K7:P-19T "Akegata" Kusari Container Transport

ship2

Dragon.Slayer
T-282-F "Garanchou" GMG Freighter

ship3

OSC|Garden.of.Eden
L-584 "Enterprise" Luxury Liner

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4. Details:

Born in the barely arable, ashen and volcanic, and artifact-littered Planet Crete, Jaden Armand was the only child of Kamos and Rosanna Armand, the latter having died at childbirth due to her mother's poor health.

Kamos was the owner of his own artifact mine, but his rule was fair and compassionate, and Jaden learned many of her values from how her father treated his subordinates. Despite this, the mining business was always dangerous, where not only cave-ins, but also ancient traps were a common hazard. and Jaden took it upon herself to find a way to ease her people's plight.

As Jaden grew older, her father's mine grew in size and scope. This allowed the Armand family to afford things like an indoor swimming pool, a hobby that Jaden grew fond of, in addition to various other luxuries from Orbital Spa and Cruise. To herself, she hoped that one day she would be able to afford herself and her father enough for them both to fly around in comfort and luxury.

However, it also attracted competition. Several owners of the other artifact mines were obvious in their jealousy in Kamos' progress with his mine, and a few times the workers between his mine and the others would come to blows over ownership of particular mining sites. He warned Jaden that she'd have to stay strong in case anything bad might happen to him.

When Jaden was of age, she took on the Malvada Cloud Trial, and came back successful to a father who had just finished setting up her first Centurion. But before they could celebrate came news of a massive Outcast force headed towards Omicron Gamma. Jaden hadn't time to train with marksmanship, so her father co-piloted the vessel, while she handled the controls. The battle quickly turned ugly and when her vessel got shot, exploding the seat behind her and killing her father, she panicked and fled back to Crete to the nearest hospital. Unfortunately, he died from massive burns and internal bleeding.

But as Jaden wept by her father's bedside, her mine was attacked by her father's rivals, and everyone there perished. Losing her main means of livelihood, and branded an 'Untouchable' for having fled the battle, Jaden was forced to sell her house and live off the streets. Beaten and raped many times, she realized she was infertile from the fact she never got pregnant from any of the incidents, the reason she would much later find out being the radiation from the Malvada Cloud Trials. Using that, she turned towards prostitution for a time, circumventing her 'Untouchable' status from the fact she was infertile.

One day, Jaden met Salvador Giovanni, the leader of a small community of Untouchables who still willingly served the Empire, and she joined without hesitation. As the community grew, so too did Jaden's relationship with Salvador, and she became the community's 'mother' somewhat.

Unfortunately, there were those in the Empire that didn't want these Untouchables to grow influential, so they betrayed the community to the Bounty Hunters Guild. Jaden, Salvador, and many other Untouchables were ambushed in Omicron Kappa. When Jaden's Centurion was crippled, a shrapnel destroying her left eye, Salvador sacrificed himself to save her by tractoring in her pod, then jettisoning her off into the vastness of space.

Months later, her pod would be found in Omicron Delta by another Bounty Hunters Guild member named Felix Gullington. Felix took her in, nursed her back to health, and despite her Corsair origins Jaden was offered a position to be one of Felix's wingmates, something Jaden thought was uncharacteristic of a BHG member, which later he would admit the real reason was that he had fallen for her at first sight. Felix helped teach Jaden a lot of things and cleared up various misconceptions she had of the rest of Sirius, and slowly Jaden developed feelings for him.

However, Felix had an ex-girlfriend, Alyssia Bagginsons, another BHG member who couldn't bear the thought of breaking up with him despite his constant rebukes. When she caught wind of Felix's new lover, she went ballistic and plotted for the couple's demise. She rallied other Corsair-haters within the guild and set up a trap for the two at an abandoned, to-be-scrapped space station, under the guise that a top-tier criminal boss was there in hiding. Tricked, and then trapped alongside a timed bomb in the station, Felix was forced to stay behind in the control room to rewire enough time for the blast doors to stay open while Jaden escaped. However, Felix timed one blast door wrongly, causing it to close prematurely and snapped Jaden's left leg clean off, and she had to use a nearby blowtorch to cauterize the wound.

Escaping in Felix's ship, Jaden looked back to only see Felix's final goodbye consumed in the bomb's blast, destroying the entire station. After tending her amputation in a hospital, Jaden vowed to get back at Alyssia for her transgressions. For a month, Jaden plotted on how to eliminate Alyssia, until a window of opportunity presented itself in the form of her target taking a break in Planet Curacao. Jaden flew her ship over to Alyssia's window as she was changing, and then unloaded the ship's entire arsenal upon the room, eliminating her for good. After fleeing from the authorities, Jaden went back to the station's debris field, and deposited a pod containing a cryogenically-stored bouquet of roses, and a written farewell to the man she loved and lost.

For a couple of years, she roamed Sirius as a Freelancer for hire, mainly as a light fighter scout, and occasionally as a prostitute. The loss of two lovers had scarred her greatly, so her methods were cold and calculating. One day, she met a trader named Travis Zidane who was not only impressed by her skills as a scout, but also by her skills at the bedroom, and offered her a position in his small band of smugglers.

With heavy reluctance, she took on the job of escorting him through some of the most dangerous routes in Sirius, and 'escorting' him whenever he needed it. Travis quickly developed a soft spot for the hardened ice queen, and did all sorts and manner of means of showing just how much he wanted to see Jaden smile again over the years, ranging from the diarrhea-inducing, to the outright craziest schemes. Slowly, he managed to get through to her, and soon Jaden was impressed by his dedication and tenacity, and found enough courage to smile and learn to love again.

However, a large family of Outcasts had been tracking the smuggler band for many months, figuring out the perfect time for them to strike. That time came when the band were heading through Sigma-13, through a remote part of the nebula towards a jump hole. The Outcasts ambushed them hard: a fleet of two gunboats and almost a dozen wing of fighters surrounded the convoy. Jaden did her best to fend off as many as she could, but two lucky missiles from the gunboats deshielded her vessel, then crippled it, exploding her console and severely charring her left arm before she could jettison. In a desperate effort, Travis tractored in her pod alongside the other smuggler pilots, then fired them off at the escaping escorts for them to tractor in, promising to Jaden that as soon as he's shaken off the Outcasts, he'll return to her. Jaden watched helplessly as the Outcasts focus-fired on Travis' freighter, the only remaining smuggling vessel, until the sortie disappeared into the clouds.

As Jaden was recovering, a Gas Miners' Guild pilot came to tell her that Travis didn't make it. In disbelief, Jaden flew back to one of the Gas Miner Stations nearest where the event took place to ask around. Rumor has it the Outcasts caught and beheaded him in a very gruesome fashion. Devastated by the news, Jaden went into isolation.

The next time she's heard from is as the security officer onboard a Borderworlds Transport, for a trader named Leonardo Tigre. The two didn't get along very well, and eventually Jaden went with another Freelancer named David Gee. He took her with her back to his secret island-estate in Planet New Tokyo, where she would live there alongside him relatively-peacefully, while she would from time-to-time venture out and do her usual thing of scouting and 'escorting'. Despite her better judgement, Jaden developed some feelings for David, who didn't exactly reciprocate the feelings, but wasn't against them either.

One day, two mysterious pilots equipped with advanced weaponry and equipment invaded the island-estate, as vengeance from David Gee for having tried to allegedly-eliminate Leonardo Tigre.

(still in progress)

OSC|Vera.Cruz - "Akegata" HT
Dragon.Slayer - "Garanchou" Fr
OSC|Garden.of.Eden - "Enterprise" Liner

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Tamiya Dachiko

1. Character Sheet

1. Full Name: Tamiya Fushigina Dachiko
   
2. Birthday (Age): 15 February, 782 A.S. (42)
   
3. Species, Bio-gender, Socio-gender: Human, Male, D1
   
4. Hair Length, type, natural color, dye (optional): long ponytail, straight, black
   
5. (optional) Facial hair length, type, natural color, dye (optional): none
   
6. Skin Color: yellow-white
   
7. Eye Color: light brown
   
8. Height (cm), Weight (kg): 176cm, 76kg
   
9. Physical and Mental Quirks/Disabilities: none
   
10. Known Relatives:
    
    1. Mother: Saichi Saitama (deceased)
       
    2. Father: Tamo Dachiko (deceased)
       
    3. Oldersibling1: Tamama, Male
       
    4. Oldersibling2: Saisa, Female
       
    5. Oldersibling3: Bakuto, Male (deceased)
       
    6. Oldersibling4: Tamachi, Male (deceased)
       
    7. Oldersibling5: Saitamo, Female (deceased)
       
    8. Oldersibling6: Setsuna, Female (deceased)
       
    9. Oldersibling7: Tonkaitsu, Male (deceased)
       

2. Factions Involved in (chronological)

Samura Industries, circa 800 - 802

::::: Samura Industries :::::
>>> Engineering Scientist <<<

1. Where Heaven meets the Earth (still to be made)
   
2. Blood-Stained Cherry Tree (still to be made)
   

Kusari State Police, circa 802 - 824

::::: Kusari State Police :::::
>>> Junsa-Bucho <<<

1. Death Mark: Tamachi (still to be made)
   
2. Death Mark: Saitamo (still to be made)
   
3. Death Mark: Setsuna (still to be made)
   
4. Death Mark: Tonkaitsu (still to be made)
   
5. Death Mark: Bakuto (still to be made)
   

Blood Dragons, circa 824 - Present

::::: Blood Dragons :::::
>>> Recruit <<<

1. Death Mark: Tamama (still to be made)
   
2. Death Mark: Saisa (still to be made)
   
3. Fermi Paradox: Tamiya Logs (still to be made)
   

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3. List of Ships

ship1

BD|Dachiko.Tamiya
B50P "Katana" Blood Dragon Very Heavy Fighter

ship2

Chin.Chou
"Kagutsuchi" Blood Dragon Cruiser

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4. Details:

Born at Planet Kyushu, Tamiya was the eighth and youngest son of the late Tamo and Saichi Dachiko. Tamo was an astroflight school teacher while Saichi was a farmer. Notably, Tamiya was the only child who didn't start through a life of crime. When Tamiya came of age he worked for Kishiro as an engineering scientist for Samura on Yokohama Shipyard, while the rest of his siblings were criminals. Two of them became Farmers' Alliance cronies, four went with Hogosha, while one of them killed Tamiya's parents in a sadistic initiation.

Furious, Tamiya applied for the KSP, vowing to apprehend his malicious brothers and sisters. Three of them were apprehended in his term before the Bret-Kus war, but the other four he couldn't touch since they were under Hogosha's protection. A Blood Dragon cruiser captain, Kicho Kazushi, contacted Tamiya, and asked if he and Tamiya could secretly work together in taking down Hogosha. Tamiya agreed, and by the establishment of the Republic of Kusari, Tamiya and Kicho managed to down two of the Hogoshan crime lords.

One day, the crew of Kicho's cruiser contacted Tamiya, saying that Kicho had been assassinated by Hogosha. They told him that in Kicho's will, that the command of the Chin.Chou be handed down to Tamiya, in exchange that Tamiya apply for the Blood Dragons, figuring he would do more good with them than through the thumb of the Kusarian government and of Samura.

BD|Dachiko.Tamiya - Katana HF
Chin.Chou - "Kagutsuchi" Cu

old RP

:First Generation:

Leonardo Tigre:
[color=#FFFF33]To Fight for a Country that Hates You
Strip Me of My Slavery!

Autobiography:

Character Details:

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Milarosa Bloodstone:
To Trip and No One to Catch You...

Character Details

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current ships under the Tigre Family:

Vagabond-III - Independent Series "DL" BWL trade ship commanded by the above-mentioned

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Canon/Accepted Stories:

General Stories: Tigre Family Estate

• The Dove Returns to its Ruin...
  

What Death Reveals (The Funeral of Late Maranda Heatshield)

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Although non-cannon, it would be a waste of effort if I didn't paste in my first blunders and spin-offs... but they were great, and I enjoyed making them... I salute David Gee for his involvement in them... he was a great man.

Day 3 at the Kodiak
Day 2 at the Kodiak
Day 1 at the Kodiak

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