' Wrote:I like it, a lot. Although the rings don't fit in with the bretonian line, they look pretty damn sexy!
Only thing I can say is the head and the engines. The head should be a little fatter, with the lower bit extending towards the body more. Also, try to make the tail more curved and fishlike, possibly going over the engines a little. Of course, the engine does look a little weird too.
Cheers matey, Well the idea for the rings is to invoke a silhouette-like appearance of a stingray, in keeping with the fishyness of Bretonia. I've removed the rings before, but it doesn't look as nice imho, and too similar to the Bretonian Battleship in shape.
Noted about the engines, I guess I'm just toying with different ideas how Bretonia's technology could be enhanced between .85 and .86. I suppose it doesn't help that the engine area isn't textured, so it makes it look worse than it may otherwise be. But I'll go ahead and texture the area and see what happens, if the overwhelming feedback for that part of the model is negative, I'll alter it.
Thanks for the other points, I'll see how i can evolve it further. :)
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