Bretonian Command Carrier

[Luis]

I would say this is an awesome model, but the engine could be modified as it looks like a bee-hive and as for the rings, possibly make them a bit smaller. Reminds me of the Zoner Juggernaut so far. Nonetheless tune it up, and it'll look god-like.

Dont even compare that to the Zoner Juggernaut - it has no resemblance at all.

Now back to the model-

Fhloston - the model looks good - more of an "import" than a Freelancer look. The "huge" rings, I don't know where in the hell you pull that out from, but they got to go if you want it as a Bretonia Carrier. The nose reminds me of the IMG Carrier, which in terms, IMG and Bretonia are >:( - so they cannot share there same designs or else their rage will turn into molten lava. Take a look at the Bretonia Battleship - the front looks very roundish than a "point" nose.

Hmph... the engine...

*looks at him and rolls new paper*

You don't want to get smack with a news paper, don't you? The engine does certainly looks like a beehive like ghost face posted. Again, look at the Bret. Battleship - get a good look around it and mix it with your ideas.

The poly count is tremendously high. Try to reduce it to 8k or 9k polies. Remember, you have to mount turrets and other equipments on it. So, you have it as 11.5k polies, (if its not triangulated), if you take that and multiply it by 2 = it will become 23k polies. That means - you only have 3k of space to mount equipment.

--Luis