Bretonian Command Carrier

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now THAT, is what i call overcompensating with bevel. i think you went a little TOO crazy with that tool, dont you? you dont have to bevel each and every face on the model you know. not only does it look awkward, it doesnt fit in, furthermore, it makes your life hell when you have to texture that with the vanilla textures for bretonia. even then, there is nothing remotely bretonian about this design in my eyes at it stands. the ring will be both a problem in RP as well as oorp. how do you expect something so wide to dock with trade lanes, jumpgates, etc? furthermore, the engines are underdeveloped as it looks. it looks like you took a cylinder, took some faces, and extruded them inward and left it at that- a half arsed job. might i also point out, that is in no way a complete texture job, but its a very good first attempt at texturing however. if you look at bretonian ship hulls, you will find much to your annoyance that the tards at DA loved to go crazy with detail work in terms of texturing the bretonian ships, and you should be aiming to have something that looks as closely similar as possible.

the launch bays look weird, its like someone took a hot screwdriver to a block of cheese and just poked holes at random into the poor unsuspecting cheese. for the amount of work put into the model in terms of details, your poly count is -way- too high compared to what it should ideally be for something like that.

like i said, a good first attempt at both modelling and texturing, but you've got a bit of a way to go to get it right. practice = perfect. ignore the fact that 80% of the replies are "omg its cool i want to fly one", since that is not proper criticism/advice. if you want to improve, you have alot to work on.

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