Concerning the model. Well, Justin dropped the original concept art in the NTF chat at one point. It needs more beef. By that, I mean you kinda mauled it with that hole in the middle, and all the fiddly parts look just a tad skinny. My suggestion is to close up that thing that looks like it's supposed to be a hangar. Just have doors there instead. Massive holes in a ship are generally not a good thing. More pictures would also be very greatly appreciated.
Flamey bits removed, tasty bits remain. kinda like nandos chicken, the way i like it. avoid flamey bits in the future- Gurj