Anyway, the picture of the character looks stunningly good in my opinion. If you're still up for a challenge you could try to improve the rest of the bar.
A few things:
-Font: Look for something more modern and fitting, it's a computer message.
-The charpic: Don't center it, put it somewhere on the left or right.
-The style: Might be the hardest part, but I want it to be in some sort of hologram. Check Anomanders first attempt for reference.
-The shape: I'm not a big fan of the shape you've used in your attempt, so I'd like it more sleek and ... well, subtle, perhaps square, but not a whole block, as I said, take Anomanders attempt for reference.