The Shadows (Brand New)

[RmJ]

Something bothers me.
This ship would simply have to be massive. On a scale that would make the Executor look like a shrimp in comparison. Such a ship, even being constructed, then being constructed in Coalition controlled Earth (I don't know if the extended intro is lore; if it was there was no Earth since the Nommies decided to blow it all up if it supposedly launched 18 years after the sleeper ships) and then by chance ending up in Sirius is just too unbelievable for me.

I apologize if this causes me to double post but is the only thing I would wish to be worked on. Perhaps the fleeing ship followed the same course maps generated by chance of the sleeper ships. Dunno just would like the tighten the edges abit.

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