The Crew, the Manhattan Street Gang

[BaconSoda]

I kinda like your metaphor for the gang wars between the crips and bloods in LA (or wherever). Being a resident of Detroit and a witness to some really shady things, though, I have to say that some of this might be in bad taste. Laying back a little bit on the gangster stereotype in space would probably be a good idea, since gangsters flying [well] is somewhat laughable. Then there's the exact copy of Eminem, who is actually one of the most respectable people you can ever talk to who I doubt would ever be a part of a gang at this point of his life. I don't really know the other 2 rappers you have there, and I can understand the part where they appeal to gangsters and have that kind of fashion to sell their albums, but not copying their lives to a tee would be nice.

Overall not a poor concept, though. Just needs a little help in the delivery.

Also, please, lets use something other than Sabres. Kingfisher and Havok should be somewhat available to you, as well, since you're Liberty pirates. Using those more than the Sabre/Switchblade/Falcatta would be a nice change in pace.

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[8:32:45 PM] Dusty Lens: Oh no, let me get that. Hello? Oh it's my grandma. She says to be roleplay.
[12:49:19 AM] Elgatodiablo: You know its nice that you have all that proof and all, Bacon... but I just don't believe you.