The.Old.One

[Divine]

The point of this thread is for the story not the character and over the past 2-3 days I've completly changed my RP.

And the whole point on feedback is that they actually give suggestions on how to improve one's RP.

Well then.
For the start. If the feedback is not about the character, then to what is your story related, if not your character?
Your story on the forums may be fine and all (didn't bothered reading) but you need to take into consideration that all what you write is worth a crap when people just see you doing crap ingame (I've seen you bombarding Java too actually).
So deal with the fact they're not just giving you feedback on your written story, but also on your chars general behaviour ingame.
It's not them Q_Qing. It's them giving you hints to -improve- your RP.
You asked for it.

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