The Retribution Chronicles

[Leo]

Update

As you some of you know, I've been absent for some time trying to get my life in order and out of the depression and thoughtless rage of a storm I was fighting in my soul, so I've let this slide a little bit.

However, I've come to a conclusion. The Retribution Chronicles, while an actual book series I am working on (three parts/books), on the Discovery forums they will be re-written in their entirety in a shorter format, while the longer formats will remain in the books I am writing (Retribution is almost completed). The shorter more compact versions will remain on Discovery for all to read at their leisure.

Writing extensive posts on the forums that span tens of pages the aren't logs or biographies kind of exhausts a lot of people's eyes and they will lose interest in the story. That is why I'm going to rewrite "Retribution" and change the story slightly and shorten "The Rise of Jacob Keller" down as well to a more controllable post. The first part will be completely rewritten as has already been noted on the forum. The second book, already in the process of being written, will simply take a slightly different path than it was going to and be shortened, while still maintaining it's original path that it was going to in the book portion that I am still in the process of writing.

Hope this answers some questions, if anyone had any, as to the storyline of the Retribution Chronicles. Hope it helps.

~Leo

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You fear oblivion. Yet you forget. The universe remembers every atom of your being. Even dust hums your name in the dark.
The Banished Legion