Bretonia Bomber is wanted

[Firebird]

Like the improvements in Angel's 2nd version. The single engine in the middle is in line with the Bretonian battleship and light fighter. The ship doesn't look weighed down anymore, so good improvements. Agree after a 2nd look, the wings are slightly off from Bretonian design (they're more bat-like at the moment than fish-like). Not sure how to fix this:unsure:, for the artists out there if you've got ideas suggest giving sketches for segments to improve rather than modelling the whole thing.

Doom's...not too keen on, sorry. Maybe its the colouring and perspectives but they look very...bloated. The design on the left-side 2nd to last row gave me a somewhat radical idea though. What about extending those wing tips out and then curving them together such that from the front they look like a side-ways 8. Place the torp tubes inside the corners, maybe have them double as engines or place the engines next to the sides of the main body. Guess thinking sorta like the gungan transport from episode 1 in terms of size ratios on the wings height and width. I included a very quick sketch as a brainstorm. And no comments on my artistic ability, I know it sucks:lol:, its meant to give these more talented guys some ideas:cool:

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