Rorry's Renegades |RR

[Hielor]

This:

-i always had a "problem" that the renegades are too Rorry centric so to say- i mean your writeup is really perfect for the Rorry character but it somehow always reads to me as "Rorry and his not so important sidekicks". What i mean is if it weren't for Rorry as a charismatic leader his renegades would have no reason to be and might just join any other random pirate/mercenary faction. Maybe if you can put some insights in your writeup where you get all the corsair/gallia hating rheinland pirates from so your folks have a motivation to stick together if the king somehow dies for real.

and this:

I don't think official status is something you want for a faciton like the Renegades. It revolves around a single guy, played by Veygaar. I think that if he leaves for some reason, the faction is gone as well.

I don't think a cult of personality should become an official faction.