The intro looks nice, but the rest looks rushed and hazy.
Theres nothing about Hellfire Legion or the Liberty Security Force.
The part about LPI is, well wrong. We all know that it is no longer Government owned in roleplay.
I can't understand why Xeno's would be heading to Bretionia. They are full on anti-foreign trade and the us of robots to replace those in work, for which both Bretionia and Kusari use, plus Liberty. So they will have little care for Gallia yet.
Just does not reflect anything at all, Rogues only care for piracy, and are disorganised. In that you get the idea they are well organized.
Only good thing is for the Hackers That comes truely to my mind. With the relations to Order.
Everything else As i have said above I cannot understand at all.