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[hanover fist]

Thanks again for taking the time to read it guys.
I tried to keep it short and sweet and readable without boring you to tears.
I am loving the feedback, it helps me to know what to focus on as the story advances.
Thanks!

@ Sokol:
This->

...The Rheinland Secret Service didn't have my name...

is where this->

...SS officer...

came from. I wondered how to be more specific without being lengthy and losing rhythm, then said, meh, it'll do. Still, I just knew someone would notice it. Good eye, sorry for the confusion.
I had no intent to invoke the "Schutzstaffel".

@ Primitive:
Not even a guess at my secret Identity?
An inkling?

---And I think so far only 2, maybe 3 people KNOW who I am...so you guys "Shhhh!"

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