Renzu Line

[Jinx]

model critizism:

- the ships appear to be a bit too low on meshed detail - and the "primitive shapes" shine through sort of.
- the gunboat especially appears to be a cylinder that is squeezed at both ends - but keeps the cylinder shape.
- the general design of the fighters is good - they look "just kusari enough" while also looking generic
- i m not 100% sure, but they don t look too similar to the liner - do they? ( please post your renzu liner again )
- all in all, the ships are good, but a little too simple for my taste.

in general:

- renzu is generic ( free for all ) and there are no plans to change that.
- renzu is not "owned" by anyone in a sense that they can restrict its usage. ( at least not at that time )
- if renzu became "the new generic line" - we could restrict zoner stuff a little more ( a good thing ) and beef them up, since they became factionized as opposed to generic.

suggestion:

- moving the canopy of the fighters more to the tip might improve their look as not looking like an odd 20th century jet
- for some reason - the vertical backfin of the fighters doesn t look too good, can t tell why - but maybe you can experiment with it a little.

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