Keep in mind i only intend to be constructive, i know this is hard to make up and i in no way want to offend the person who worked on this.
honestly i have to agree with sir jameson and thexare.
this storyline is IMPOSSIBLE for us outcasts to survive, you seriously cripple our house
just one example: if im reading this right, than the system we use to smuggle is under full gallia control taking away more than 90% of the incomes of the outcasts. first off all: there's no way we would let that happen, as mister jameson suggested we should atleast attempt to give em a royal slapping. and second: if we wanna keep up roleplay, ye might as well remove the outcast house cause there is no way they will survive this:(
A Psalm out of the outcast history books.
The dons are our shepherds; I shall not want. They make us live with a cause; They lead us trough the still vasts of space. They restore our souls; They lead us in the paths of righteousness For The Orange Dream. Yai, though we fly through the valley of the shadow of death, we will fear no evil; For the Spirits are with us; Your leadership and Your cardamine, they comfort us. You prepare a safe home for us in the presence of our enemies; Surely goodness and mercy shall follow us All the days of our life; And we will dwell in the house of the outcasts Forever