Event coordination: Corsair attack on Rheinland

[McNeo]

Ok, I was working on some rumours for the Road to Rheinland part IV, which i posted on a different thread that no one took notice of. So here they are. Ill make one for each of the points we go to on the road map, relecting how far the Corsair fleet got to its objective. As it stands as a template, do these two look good?:

If we get quite far, then it should end up a bit like this:

With the securing of Sigma 13 and the threat from the north alleviated, the new Corsair northern fleet spearheaded by units from the Brotherhood smashed into Frankfurt and took the thinly spread Rheinland military and police units by surprise. The disarray this caused meant that Rheinland forces were knocked out in the area, while the Bundschuh base in the area suffered heavy damage. Coalition forces struck at the same time in Stuttgart, and military forces were pinned down, unable to retreat from the area. Corsair forces ravaged Frankfurt, and moved on to Stuttgart, where the hammer met the anvil and Rheinland military forces were wiped out. New Berlin proved very tough for the forces of Corsairs to crack, and the offensive ran out of supplies before the last Rheinland line could be penetrated. As the Corsairs retreated home to Crete, they passed through Dresden, knocking out the Hessians in the area and distrupting the diamond trade. Battleship Shwerin proved to much for the weakened task force to put out of action, and the partially successful offensive ended with the Corsair forces landing on Crete to regroup and resupply.

If we dont get very far, then it should end up somthing like this:

With sigma 13 secured by the Corsair forces led by the Brotherhood and the Hogosha diverting the Outcast's attention away from the area, an offensive into Frankfurt was underway. However, when the Corsair forces jumped, they were met with the full force of three Rheinland elite military divisions. The Corsair forces fought valiantly, but were slowly being whittled down. The Coalition forces started their attack and blitzed their way through Stuttgart to Frankfurt, to aid their comrades. Two of the three divisions of the Rheinland fleet were destroyed, and another one severely crippled. However, with no strategic momentum, and a badly damaged force themselves, what was left of the Corsair force withdrew to Omicron Gamma to lick their wounds. Rheinland was prepared for the attack on Frankfurt, due to the selective phasing of the New Berlin to Sigma 13 jump hole. The Corsair force won the battle, but barely, and Corsair forces returned home to regroup and resupply for another attack. However, the Elders of Crete decided against another attack, due to their severly weakened force. The Northern fleet was broken down, and given the task of defence from a possible counter attack by Rheinland or, worse, the Outcasts.

Also, can we do it on Saturday night at 10pm as well please? I am not really sure if I personally can be there at 10pm on Friday every week (as traffic on the M25 is bad, to say the least). So I don't want to let the team down...sounds a bit selfish, I know...