Need a little help RP

[trekky]

ok i Applied for Ageira Technologies Recruitment
this is what i put down


In Character Part:'€¢Name: Noonien Soong
'€¢Date Of Birth: 788 A.S.
'€¢Sex: male
'€¢Previous Jobs: I worked as an independent trader
'€¢Skills: trading/working large ship
'€¢Place of Birth: USS _Enterprise (A).
'€¢Department Interested in Joining: Transportation Division
Please answer all the following Questions:

Why do you want to join Ageira Technologies?
dad work as a independant trader for a long time when i got old enough he gave me the ship and after 1 year working for myself i would like a corp flag under my name

Have you ever been charged with crime or have a criminal Record? If so what for?
nope.

Do you have any skills that you think will benefit you in the field you requested?
I always fly as fast as I can so I am able to get the best relation between profit and the time being used to make it. i try to talk myself out of fights.

Tell us about yourself.
born on USS_Enterprise (A) my was pretty normal for a life for a captains son
Lol I remember one time on the USS_Enterprise (A) he told a pirate to go to ****
Well the pirate destroyed the ship we were in escape pods for 3 days
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OOC Information:'€¢Character Names: USS _Enterprise

'€¢Timezone: GMT-5

Do you have your own vessel you will be using?
yes i own a Barge
Have you been sanctioned within the last six months?
yes
Internet disconnected and was killed when I was offline so i forgot to report it





and i got this
Mr Soong, your application has been denied.



pls tell me what i did wrong and anything i can do to impove my application

any opinion on what i can do to do better?

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Im back baby! may even start CODEYs again but will have to see how Bases affect that who know maybe i will save for a base