Need a little help RP

[Contaan]

My advice is to use a spell checker as well. It makes any application easier to read and understand. Also, look at other applications to see what worked, and what didn't work for them.

Edit: Try to flesh out your story a little more as well. Talk about where your character has been, and what he has done in the past.

"Do you have any skills that you think will benefit you in the field you requested?
I always fly as fast as I can so I am able to get the best relation between profit and the time being used to make it. i try to talk myself out of fights.

Tell us about yourself.
born on USS_Enterprise (A) my was pretty normal for a life for a captains son
Lol I remember one time on the USS_Enterprise (A) he told a pirate to go to ****
Well the pirate destroyed the ship we were in escape pods for 3 days
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This would concern me as well... as you say you "talk your way out of fights", but have been in a situation before that your character's father (I'm guessing) "told a pirate to go to ****". I am not certain of Ageira's policy but I also doubt they will allow you to fly a barge as a newcommer into their faction unless you have permission. Finally, if you see any Ageira, or any faction you want to join in-game, try flying with them sometime. Once they get an idea for your RP, and how you act, it will give them a better picture of who you are, instead of just text.