It starts to look good. I'd personally prefer it to be longer and not that... hunchbacky, however.
I'll quote Blodo:
"Like it says in the first post, the battleship should be long and not too wide, sort of bulky but not too much, any wings should be short. This is so that it is environmentally prepar".
But it looks like a big ship already. Also, what is that razor(s)?