Kamida Family

[Arctic95]

Very well written

Thanks! Its certainly been a work in progress, if I did it all in once I have a feeling I might have lost my sanity.

It's realistic, simplistic and doesn't describe unnecessary details.

I'm especially glad that you saw those aspect in the story, mainly since I am quite prone to rambling and i'm just happy it hasn't come across that way in this story.

It's a nice backbone story to fall on as a "pirate" (I'll use this term very loosely) character.

I agree with you there in all regards - one persons villain is another's freedom fighter. Hopefully the general trading community will get a sense of that feeling as well, rather than just seeing us as 'pirates with delusions' which in all fairness is what we really are.

Overall I'm just happy you found it an interesting read, hopefully RP wise you should find it just as entertaining!