nice - one gets a much better idea of how it looks like that. - and well.. i said bloom, but its just enbseries bloom - which is a full screen after effect - while the bloom you used appears to be more focussed on real lightsources.
the spinning youtube render also made use of shadows and dynamic lightning - something freelancer doesn t have, which gives a model a HUGE quality boast. it also made use of spectacular highlights ( while freelancer only uses ambient lights and static vertex lightning )
either way - the model looks good - and not too sophisticated. - the skinning might be a bit boring without all those posteffects.