' Wrote:i had an idea on the willing host thing, but im not sure if it would work.
THis is my idea, the person's family is killed in the crossfire between Liberty and the Order, and he blames their deaths on the Order and LSF, so he seeks out a nomad to take him as a host for vengeance on The Order and Liberty
Well, you have to make a real story out of that and it needs to be solid and strong enough to be believable. Right now it's just a sparse premise, a rather doubtful one, no more than that. Make it a story and then people will decide if it's plausible or not. Explain thoughts of your character in the story, you have lead the reader to understand the character and make him/her to see why the character had made this extreme decision and not any other. This would probably happen only under extreme psychological condition, not just some simple vengeance but a deeper, complex feelings and thoughts wrapping inside as your character finally gives up and throws himself into the abyss knowing that there is no way back.
With that I might help, but don't think that I'll write it up for you. You'll do it yourself, as I can only help by giving suggestions and commenting along the way.
