It's definitely a nice idea and some amount of work has gone into it.
However this is a forum section for Discovery's development. Unless it was intended to be submitted to Discovery, it shouldn't be in this section.
That said, it does look a bit..badly put together. It literally looks like a rusty shipyard, unfit for transit, with a strange 'asteroid' blob on the back and a big blue nose stuck on the front.
Not very elegent or smooth unfortunately.
The lore behind the Nomads is worth a gander at when developing stuff for them, they are pretty unique after all.
Overall:
Nice concept, poorly put together, good amount of work involved, wrong section of the forum.
