NSTO

[Petitioner]

Two R's in "Northern."

It's just a timeline, I recommend adding in a more coherent and cohesive description of what it is the group does, where it operates, etc etc, and a more logical line of equipment.

And if you're going to say that "x house signed and agreed to y treaty/document/whatever," then you ought to not say the organization has been around for a while, but rather start it now by drawing up a proposal to these houses, and starting things off in the current setting. Yeah, everyone likes to be part of something that's been around a while, in-RP, but that seems silly with this. And allied to Corsairs, neutral to all lawfuls, allied with the IMG? Good luck with that.


Good concept, needs a major overhaul.

And are you currently existing or is this a draft, designed to catch the attention of people interested in joining this group, once it is made, should it ever be?

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