New logo in the making - Feedback is welcome

[Xenon]

Greyscaling is NOT for the result. It is to check your white and black (tone) balance. Having more darker areas will make your lighter areas more pronounced. Like in the 2nd picture with darker background. It will bring your foreground (the letters) closer and more clearer.

The first pic doesn't have enough negative space and the hues and tones are too similar. It helps being blind irl because you can just lean back to see what pops. (just zoom out and use a blur to see what retains design shapes)

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[Tenshi Kuonji]

@Tenshi Kuonji, Thank you very much for the detailed feedback, but please let me clarify some points
First of all, NSE is not a liberty corporation, and it is not a faction. NSE is a Freelancer installation and its HQ is in Bretonia house space.
The idea of using copper color and how you analyze it is amazing, so I tried this attempt.

Thank you!!
1.- I know isn't a liberty corp, but the logo show the colors of republic of liberty (blue with red and so on) will be more fit like it was something like USI or so ... is ... weird
2.- I love be able to analyze almost everything in this cases, i just do a better analysis with you, cause personally i belive we have good mate relationships~ and for something i like i must give my best effort of it.
3.- I belive every person here is telling you the Logo you had is actually fitted for the best for you, personally i just use the kinda of color and meaning because you know ... "Alloy" everything you done surely require a lot of Alloy/SuperAlloy or something like that (and remember actually best heatsinks are made from copper)
4.- The reason why your old logo is nice is cause the color shades, as @Kauket tell you, the picture don't have sufficent negative and not sufficent background to make letters to make it attention, actually it lost cause you use literally the same color scheme, since background looks a lot like letter color, you miss the nicely visual you get in the old logo (i can't name how it names actually, cause i am not a designer, but i really try the best)
what i wanna say is "NSE" in first picture is lost cause same or visually same color is done there, with background ... in the old logo the letters are highlighted because your dark accent ... as i told you, your old logo has style in it.
Background dark (as i imagine is kinda boring, but misterious) and then, something is done right (NSE) brighten with Copper-ish color, i just belive and since you have installation in bretonia (which have that shades too) that is the reason why it feels a lot of good stuff in your old logo ...
uhm...sorry if i get to confuse you ... i just can't make my ideas go on fluently at 4:00am by doing lot more things :'( but i hope i help you a little bit
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[Groshyr]

Original logo was the best for independent company. New one has Liberty vibe and looking just worse and less accurate

[Xenon]

Appreciate your feedback a lot @Tenshi Kuonji
I see @Kauket's and your point is very clear, I will try to renew my old logo but with the same aspects you guys mentioned - I kinda do not find the blue, red, white, and orange colors are related exclusively to liberty space, because the NSE installation got the blue, orange, white colors, and it uses purple sometimes too on researchers comms layouts. The base in the game is red lights, and blue smoke, in a large red, white, and blue background of the system layout. The nebulas inside Cambridge are most blue and white... so the colors are coming from the Cambridge and the NSE-based backgrounds.





Thank you @Groshyr for your feedback.

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[Tenshi Kuonji]

If you don't mind my asking @Xenon
Can you tell me which model is your base? or how you get it?? <3
Please~~

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[Groshyr]

Core 5, custom model. Request must first be approved by GMs, then made by one of the systems devs - me or Markam atm.

[Xenon]

If you don't mind my asking @Xenon
Can you tell me which model is your base? or how did you get it?? <3
Please~~

This is a special model for Core (4) and Core (5) bases my friend. I got this made by a special designer @Skorak which is unfortunately no longer available on discovery. The guy is amazing at collecting different parts of bases and compiling them together to form a new good looking design. This costs 2,500 Scientific data files, which is equivalent to 7.5 billion game credits. I do not know any other designers willing to design for players new models, I tried sending some players who were asking for designers to system developers here but they returned with a refusal to help, sadly.

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[Xenon]

Anymore feedback is welcome

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[Xenon]

How about that then xD
New one on the left and old one on the right

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[Groshyr]

Old one is still better