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Offline jdftheman
05-04-2009, 12:57 PM, (This post was last modified: 05-04-2009, 12:58 PM by jdftheman.)
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Quote: Why does it need to be a battleship? Honestly, you'll probably get very aggravated flying through asteroid fields to get to jump holes in a battleship. Why not a fighter or gunboat or freighter even?
Well, that's something that will be fully explained when i post the story(i hope). My first idea was also to make it a freighter out for revenge on pirates, but that would be to much PVP for me, as i personally don't like it and only do it when necessary. Also it's a battleship because, like said in my first post, it's looking for a fighter it lost in battle, it sort of can't find rest until it's reunited with its lost fighter, that's why its looking for it all over sirius.

Quote:Maybe you could occasionally have a "ghostly" escort fighter? heh... now it occured to me... it would be great if it could be translucent! And how about going with just Vanilla weapons and equipment? In the spirit of oldness? Or maybe that's too much? Can't wait to see/read the story!
Well, it won't have an escort fighter, but maybe i'll also RP as the lost fighter that the battleship is looking for, but that would be after a long while, maybe 2 or 3 months after the first flight with my ghostship.
As for equipment, it will only be basic battleship primary's, nothing else, and also not all spots will be filled up with guns.
Also for the ship to be translucent, that's not really what i had in mind, I'd much rather have a ship that looks like it's ready for the scrapheap (maybe even with fires coming out of it's hull) but for some unknown reason still is able to fly. Also that would require a totally new model of ship just for me, and for that to happen I would have to become as good as Mon'star, for which i need more time to figure out what to do with it.

On a spoiler note, i was thinking of posting the story by the end of the week, maybe sooner, but it just doesn't feel right to me now, It feels like there is something missing, so if you really want, PM me your e-mail address and i might let you read it early on as a check up.
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Offline jdftheman
05-07-2009, 09:30 PM,
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Well, i submitted the story, i think that it explains the limitations i have impossed on myself, so now i would like to know what you guys think of it, seeing as this is my first decend attempt to write a RP story.
Reincarnation of the Eternal.Bha
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