Sorry here buddy but I have to agree this is to generic and widespread. Your ability to be friendly with ever house faction when Bretonia and Kusari are at war and (kusari forbids trade of their items to Bretonia) and Rhineland and Liberty are almost at war makes your idea seem implausible. Also no offense but how does a well respected company get away with hiring smugglers?
Personally I think you should look into creating an vanilla faction that no one has turned into a player faction yet like BMM, Cryer, Kishiro, etc.
I don't think it makes that much of a difference...
The point is, it's a faction proposal. It's a good one to kick off with, but I get the irking feeling that Sirius Industries does too much. Focus on trading or mining, or even arms dealing, not all three...
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Sorry Kacijon but this faction just lacks merit and worth. It is highly implausable as I said before that such a faction could exist with the wars going on. Furthermore your ship list is way to large and needs to be much more resrtricted and descriptive. Also a larger background story would work wonders for your proposal. Finally like I said smugling has to go, PERIOD. Really I appreciate your spirit in this but either focus on one thing like mining or weapons sales or look into creating a player faction based off a Vanilla group.
-Smuggling, is a no go, ALL the houses would hate you for it
-Wars.... leave it, don't try to be friendly with them all, just focus on one area
-The trading areas..... go with just one out of trading, arms dealing, and Mining, Arms dealing should go, because Lawfuls don't usually like them, and Mining just isn't profitable at all.
-The Role-play... try to make it more deep, and rooted, and don't just say: 'we are here to do this and this', say why you want to do these.
-Fix your spelling in the post as well
-Try to remember that you won't get everything your own way, Kusari will hate you if you trade with Bretonia
Also, when you said you will be online a lot..... believe me.... you won't
First, you need to sort out all your factions stuff... about 10 minutes - 1 hour a day
Second, you need to pay for all your new recruits, and train them etc. another 10 minutes - 1 hour thing
Third, you need to talk to all your leaders, stuff like that, about 30 minutes to an hour
Fourth, you need to read through the forums, another 30 minutes to 1 hour
Fifth, you need to sort out diplomatic relations etc. about 40 minutes to 1 hour (This wouldn't ned doing every day)
and, sixth, doing things like faction events, doing Artwork and things like that for them, documents, RP stories... all that stuff... About 1 hour and 30 minutes to maybe 3 hours (thats how long I had to do it for, when I owned a faction, long ago on another server) (This will need doing a lot, but not all the time)
So, on a full day:
Minimum time: 3 hours and 30 minutes
Maximum time: 8 Hours
But, this may be a long overestimate, its been ages since I was a faction leader
when your general spelling will go up by a notch, I might feel like reading this, but the mere fact its some kind of super-global faction doesnt says anything good to me.
You want a Sirius wide quasi-legal corporation that suddenly appeared out of nowhere, negating all the previous diplomatic situations?
Apart from that fact you shouldn't really exist in FL (Synth Foods maybe are one of the biggest in Sirius, and they are even just expanding), you seem to basically have a catch all policy. Selling everything you can find.
No huge corporation would be able to do smuggling without bribing people btw, especially with the war going on.
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