' Wrote:1st piece of advice: Although orphans are cute in Annie, here they get a bit over-used. Why can't your family have just fallen on hard-times? Economic down-turn, you've decided you want to get out an explorer more of Sirius, that kind of thing?
Look at my generic application template:
I was born on the Planet [insert appropriate Planet]. 2 years after my born we [insert plot device] .
Then several years after [insert opposing group] attacked and [killed/destroyed/disemboweld/dispatched] our [family/familys dog/familys favourite android] by "mistake" I lost my [see before].
I wanna join Glorius [insert name of Faction] because i wanna a revenge to [dead stuff]!. Then when i get it, its better to join that good army and pilots and learn better to PvP and get uber pro. Im honored to joining [insert faction].
My goal is to become pro pilot, and to revenge to [Fascist/Communist/Criminal/Environmentalist/Capitalist]!