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Twilight of The past
Offline McNeo
10-04-2006, 07:40 PM,
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Yes i agree. For the length of time i was reading it, my eyes were glued to the screen. :D Too bad i had to pour acid on them to dissolve the glue cause i had to go to lessons :lol:
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Offline Angel
10-06-2006, 03:46 AM,
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The Outcast doctor that was there was baffled, her mental activity was through the roof, and there where strange things setting off alarms, and spiking the machine.

Bernard walked up, " Whats going on, why isn't she wakeing up? " he asked. The doctor simply shook his head, " I don't know, all I can say is shes in some kind of coma like state, I mean she'll wake when she wakes no matter how much I do " Bernard Rubbed his chin


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Bernards voice faded, and the visions returned, of Cadiz, "....you need is a piece of DNA, and we can replicate them, even add years onto there bodys so that their ages match, to yours " she walked up to him very slowly and got right in his face, " I don't Like Liers " Ericks gulped, " I'm not lieing " he nodded, " And then all you would have to do is transfer there psychic profiles to the approperate bodys.

She started walking twords the door, " but Like I said, If your gifts aren't brought under control soon you'll be a hazard to everyone around you " and the door closed behind Kristy.

The Vision Faded and all was white, " all of that, you went through huh " Telaris said as he walked up next to Kristy, " I didn't even remember half of that, just flashs " she said, he smirked " The minds a mysterious thing ", Kristy had a confused look on her face.

" Theres something else, some thing in newcastle, It feals very familiar " she said, " Well focus on it, and see what happens " he commented. Kristy consentrated on the small flash of her memories in Newcastle, and soon they poored out like a busted dam.

The Leeds jumpgate in Newcastle came into view, there a Osirus sat next to it, It was send armadas of civilian ships through the Gate. They where soon on the Bridge, Men and women on Outcast Uniforms where running all over the Bridge, checking on the status of the Gate, and other things. When the Trio Noticed a Women sitting in the captains chair, she was smiling, while reading over a report, when she looked up, all three new it was Kristy, Though her Hair was a silvery white, and her eyes a green glow to them.

" Ma'am the last of the convoys has entered the jumpgate. " a young man said from his Radar station, " Good, seal the gate, and scramble the access codes " she said, then stareing at the gate she mumbled, " This is my fight not yours guys, sorry " as she said It the ship lurched into the Tradelane.

Seconds later the Trio where standing inside the Ruins at Newcastle, there was an eriey purple glow to everything, Kristy walked past them twords the center, there they noticed a Tall very suductive woman standing there, Her hai touched the floor, her eye where wild, but definatly evil, " Jenova! " Krist yelled.

" Ahh, my beautiful young lady, have you come to take me away from here? " the creature asked, then kind of glided off the platform, " you know you remind me of myself when I was younger, " the creature commented as the two approached each other.

" you know its a funny thing to gaze into the minds of so many, and not find out a few things " Jenova glared at her, " Like the Nomads, I've learned allotta things from them, Like who you truelly are ", Jenova hist and showed her teeth, " So though we only meet for a moment, I'm saying goodbye and I hope you rot in the depths of hell for what you have done, you Destroyed Sol, you killed off the Dom'Ka'Vash, and countless other things. I hope Its slow and painful "
Jenova only smiled

" Foolish girl, no person or thing can kill me, many have tried all have failed, the best they could do is keep me in this Prison " as she said this she levitated to the roof of the cave, nearly eith storys in the Air, " Give it your best shot Girl! " Jenova yelled.

" There is one thing your right about, we are alike in that we where gifted with the energy of nomads " jenova had a puzzled look on her face, " Ever find out what happens when you get to much juice? " before Jenova could react kristy hit her with a beam of purple blueish energy, and it stayed connected, " Well, how is it all the power you could ever want huh! " Jenova wrighted in pain, " Stop this right now ! " jenova barked.

Kristy continued, her only drive to kill this monstor, " I......I can bring them back! " jenova yelled, " I can bring them all back, your mother, your father and brother.....I can bring them back " she said in between spells of energy hitting her body, tears fell from Kristys eyes, and her strength began to waiver, and soon the beam started to fade, then as though a anwser to her path, the trio watched a two people apear out of nowhere just behind her, It was Lenne and Telaris, each putting a hand on Kristy shoulder, " where right here Kiddo, we've always been here, and always will. ", " you can do it sweetheart, your ready " lenne smiled, kristy shaking looked up to Jenova and glared.

" Ha, you think they will help, I nearly killed you humans off and I'll butcher every last one of them in Sirrus, then move on to the Rest, the C'Tans, the Miralukins, there all going to be dust! " she laughed insainly. Kristy smiled, she new she wasn't alone, she could feal Korrds presence very close, Darkstar was there as well, Virus, Luciaden, and, someone else, very faint, it was.....

Johnathon, he was with Korrd, Kristy smiled, somehow she new he was here. " This is goodbye " kristy raised her hand and pointed it to Jenova, then with a swift close of the hand, Jenova Exploded in a Massive ball of guu, Purple and blue energy and Fire.

After everything settled, Kristy Turned to her parents figures, " Are you real? " she asked. Lenne smiled, " Where as real as you want us to be sweetheart " Kristy sniffed, " Its not fair, These few moments are all we get? " Telars smiled, " No Kiddo where allways going to be here " he tapped his head, " We'll be watching over ya, In a way we never really Died, you saw to that " Kristy was puzzeled

" Don't worry everything will make sense soon, but for now enjoy your life, you have some many wonderful years ahead, Don't be bothered with anyone else's concerns, we're already very proud of you, have fun, and let destiny do its own thing. " Lenne said, as she hugged Kristy.

" Ohh and everyone else, don't worry about them everyones gonna forget about all this stuff happening once you leave, everything that you've done since the nomad Conflict, will be erased from everyones memory, a clean slate for ya " Telars said as he also hugged kristy.

" Now get goin, and have fun, god forbid find someone to settle down with " Telaris joked. And as they faded, so did the vision, until everything was white.

" So Its True then, you two are, in a small part alive " Kristy asked, lenne and Telaris nodded, " Small part, bah, In a huge part, where all alive except for the bodys. ", Kristy eyes widened, " So I could bring you two back! " she cheered, Lenne smiled " Well yes, But how is beyond me, "

" But, you should be waking up now kiddo, you've been asleep for two weeks, and should probably be waking up. " telars said, kristy nodded, then started walking away from her mother and father, then she turned back," I'll get you guys back don't worry, and I won't give up until I do " and with that she sprinted away.

Kristy stirred, then fluttered her eyes open, she was in Bed, and it was morning, the suns warm rays greeted her bedroom, she sat up and scanned the Room, there was a man sitting at her desk Asleep, It was John, she got up and grabbed a blanket, and draped it around her brother. She kissed him on the head, and he shifted a little then resumed sleeping.

Kristy Smiled, and walked out on the balcony, Looked down and saw the same wall John and Bernard had been shooting so many years ago. She remembered everything now, she just smiled staring at the Riseing Sun....

" The freinds we have lost, or the dreams that have faded.....I'll never forget you "

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The End......

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Offline Virus
10-06-2006, 04:05 AM,
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At least I got some mention!

Bravo! Bravo! Encore! Encore!

Great, wonder, amazing, double amazing story!

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Offline DarkOddity
10-06-2006, 04:56 AM,
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Excellent piece of work! :D

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Offline McNeo
10-06-2006, 07:30 AM,
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It is true......you should become professional :lol:
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Offline Nightfall
10-06-2006, 07:59 AM,
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Do the words of gratitude for sharing a piece of your mind need repeating?
My salutes!

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Offline Nic_Nac
10-06-2006, 08:47 AM,
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It was trully clever and a great story, if i had a hat on i would take it off to you :)

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Offline Fellow Hoodlum
10-06-2006, 11:53 AM,
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Well done Angel, and as usual my second read of it finds so much more.
Well thought out, and nice tie ups. Puts my bios to shame.

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Offline Angel
10-06-2006, 04:49 PM,
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Thanks Guys, its really appriciated, Just wish the forums wheren't so pick about Mp3 files.

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Offline Alpha 429
10-07-2006, 12:30 AM, (This post was last modified: 10-07-2006, 12:45 AM by Alpha 429.)
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oh well you didnt use those Mp3 files and the story was still BRILLIANT!!!!

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