Ahhhhh thanks alot guys, you can expect the third (and most likley not the last) section of the story probably tomorow evning (friday). Keep up wiht the comments!
ooc: dude, how many installations of this are you going to do? your 2 posts took up most of the last page adn now you say you're doing a third? well i know it'll be good cause the last 2 were good. keep up the good work.
Well mate, as you know, I love writing alot so why not just write here for fun? I have a bunch of other works in progress on right now, if any of you want to I can send you guys a story im working on. Its about 30 pages so far.
Haven't read these until today. Nice ones, both parts, Verginix! Good involving the npcs. Minor correction: the Artifact Cloud is called 'Malvada Cloud'.
If the stars should appear one night in a thousand years, how would men believe and adore and preserve for many generations the remembrance of the city of God? - from 'Nightfall' by I. Asimov The Outcasts consider Siniestre Nube a sacred place for several reasons. Early explorers discovered a jumphole within the depths of the cloud that leads to a strange world of ringed stars and strange craft. All ships in the burrial ground are placed facing that hole to honor the Alien Spirits. - An Outcast rumor
ooc: artifact cloud? doesn't sound that ominous... i imagine... a storm coming in and its raining model ducks, glass dolphins, and all that other useless crap that you would find at a garage sale. (oh yeah, did you know that a lot is 2 words?)
Verg, very good writing. Could you e-mail your story to me? The 30 pg one. bestflyerhere@gmail.com
I am a long-absent Supreme Commander, Executive Commander, Grand Admiral, Fleet Admiral, and Captain in the mighty Hellfire Legion. I have returned, and am on an urgent mission from Drake Thastus to return the Legion to its former glory, and to claim the galaxy for its own. Only then will I be able to rest.
RP Story (Still deciding whether or not to finish)