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[Zapp]

*bumpage*

Yes, we have some more stuff in there.

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[gronath]

*slaps Zapp*

Stop self promoting! People will eventually notice by themselves.:angry:

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[Jihadjoe]

Short and confusing. Nice. Not a lot said, quite a lot set up in very few sentances.

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[Zapp]

New post, gents. We're planning out this entire next arc, and in fact have two more posts written and ready to roll, so stay tuned.

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[Vince Piccio]

Boo.

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[Praetyre]

That's the weirdest form of double posting I've ever seen.

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[Dopamino]

The Krakens should have left the bodies of the Corsairs charred and smoldering, not bloody.

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[tfmachad]

:secret:They got all bloody from the hull panels' shrapnel exploding behind them.

Ever tried to shoot a man on foot from a Sabre maneuvering inside a docking bay? Not an easy task, my man.:no:

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[Vince Piccio]

Ever tried to shoot a man on foot from a Sabre maneuvering inside a docking bay?

No one has, so ask no questions!

Anyways, there have been a few new posts, but it's starting to get... gruesome, now. Those of you with weak constitutions may want to stop reading, as it's going to get darker. Much, much darker.

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[Jihadjoe]

very nice stuff... A line I like particularly "They had to stop the taunting beat!" just brilliant...

The idea of the very act of being alive being a mockery... very nice.

Are you going to go any further with the pre-death background of the two characters?

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