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Grumblesaur · 08-12-2012, 02:13 AM,

It's lacking in punctuation.

A way a lone a last a loved a long the riverrun, past Eve and Adam's, from swerve of shore to bend of bay,
brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to Howth Castle and Environs.

Fletcher · (This post was last modified: 08-12-2012, 02:18 AM by Fletcher.)

' Wrote:It's lacking in punctuation.

No thankfully. (Regarding ideas and comic sans)

Is this better now?

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Grumblesaur · 08-12-2012, 03:07 AM,

Somewhat better, yes, but the first five commas should actually be semicolons.

A way a lone a last a loved a long the riverrun, past Eve and Adam's, from swerve of shore to bend of bay,
brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to Howth Castle and Environs.

Fletcher · 08-12-2012, 03:09 AM,

You got me there, been a while since I've been commented about that.

Hehe, what possible reason led you to that signature?

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Grumblesaur · 08-12-2012, 05:24 AM,

It rotates, but I'm guessing you mean the "hat full of bomb" one.

A way a lone a last a loved a long the riverrun, past Eve and Adam's, from swerve of shore to bend of bay,
brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to Howth Castle and Environs.