Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP

[Boss]

Nice work.


(yes I know who you are)

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Just go play the game and have fun dammit.

all in all the conclusion is that disco doesn't need antagonist factions, it doesn't need phantoms, it doesn't need nomads, it doesn't need coalition and it doesn't need many other things, no AIs, the game is hijacked by morons to confuse the game with their dickwaving generic competition games mixed up with troll-of-the-day.

[Xoria]

Succinct. That's good.

Amateurs try to drown the reader in a flood of metaphor and adjectives.

Piercingly succinct is....I almost suspect that you read Hemingway, but who reads Hemingway anymore?

Keep going. I'm wondering if this will turn out to be a paranormal/supernatural resurrection, or a scientific/technological one.

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[pchwang]

hehe Xoria...there are some of us here that like Dickens too.;)

Everyone's writing style varies, there is no one defined style.

However, I liked it Vince!

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[Vince Piccio]

New post made, and changed the subtitle on both this and the RP. To show what it's all about...

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[Jihadjoe]

Brilliant. I love it, not seen anything this original in ages, keep it up.

but who reads Hemingway anymore?

I do... but I agree a very under-read author.

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[Vince Piccio]

Another new post. *bump*

Appreciate all feedback so far, and a note....

Dab, I'ma kill you.

Seems half the server knows who I really am....

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[Jihadjoe]

Another great post mate... Very nicely written, I really want to see where this is going now.

And yes... I know who you are as well.

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[Dab]

Dab, I'ma kill you.

*static*

Seems half the server knows who I really am....

Don't look at me on this one..

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[Vince Piccio]

Another new post.

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[Vince Piccio]

Another new post, and now we're about to introduce something new.

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