Very good. I love the story, keep it up. Oh, I did notice one small thing. In post 5, there was one instance of "[color-#ffffff]" just sitting there. Better fix that.;)
Very good, can't wait for the next section. One instance I noticed was there is a Nomad speaking without white text in this section:
The forces that were assembled were less then half of the forces shown though, but the Creatures proceeded anyway. And when they came through the JumpGate there were no more friendly forces, at least no intact ships. A cruiser was slowly rotating as fires raged through the interior. And there were full fleets of fighters and bombers escorting Assault Cruisers, that I noted with dismay, were configured for disgorging marines onto capital class ships.
Nomads, you will surrender at once and leave the humans you have captured.
*** <Our ships tearing the new groups fighters apart> Community will be preserved ***