Lambda's Horus Feedback Thread

[Mr.Badger]

Bump, added first log

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[Jeremy Hunter]

Yeah, uh, feedback about the story.

The Order hasn't been on Akabat for 45 years so there's no way Monsek could have been born on said planet - well moon - as in actuality the current Order wasn't even on Toledo for 45. More like 15 years on Toledo and like 10ish or less years on Akabat currently. Or like three. I have to check the actual time line again, but yeah.

Other than that looks good so far.

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Lythrilux]

Not sure when Order actually touched down upon it, but knowledge/existence of Akabat has been for 4 years (that's how long it's been in the mod).

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[Mr.Badger]

Yeah, uh, feedback about the story.

The Order hasn't been on Akabat for 45 years so there's no way Monsek could have been born on said planet - well moon - as in actuality the current Order wasn't even on Toledo for 45. More like 15 years on Toledo and like 10ish or less years on Akabat currently. Or like three. I have to check the actual time line again, but yeah.

Other than that looks good so far.

Ahm... yeah, thanks.

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Any questions or concerns about Bowex), just send me a private message.

[Jeremy Hunter]

Not sure when Order actually touched down upon it, but knowledge/existence of Akabat has been for 4 years (that's how long it's been in the mod).

Bout 4ish years, my bad. I forget the time line half the time. Con of being gone for two years.

Yeah, uh, feedback about the story.

The Order hasn't been on Akabat for 45 years so there's no way Monsek could have been born on said planet - well moon - as in actuality the current Order wasn't even on Toledo for 45. More like 15 years on Toledo and like 10ish or less years on Akabat currently. Or like three. I have to check the actual time line again, but yeah.

Other than that looks good so far.

Ahm... yeah, thanks.

Let me rephrase: The Order hasn't been around for 45 years. There's a reason the current command structure is relatively young compared to everyone else, but that'd a different discussion. Battleship Thebes was constructed and nearly completed during the Battle of Minor in 819 AS, where it then helped the evacation that led to it being stuck in drydock at the current time.. Anyone who was born into the Order would right now be early 20s at the eldest, probably 21 as of right now. Sorry, but the Order is just not old enough to have anyone over 21 be born into it.

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Mr.Badger]

Not sure when Order actually touched down upon it, but knowledge/existence of Akabat has been for 4 years (that's how long it's been in the mod).

Bout 4ish years, my bad. I forget the time line half the time. Con of being gone for two years.

Yeah, uh, feedback about the story.

The Order hasn't been on Akabat for 45 years so there's no way Monsek could have been born on said planet - well moon - as in actuality the current Order wasn't even on Toledo for 45. More like 15 years on Toledo and like 10ish or less years on Akabat currently. Or like three. I have to check the actual time line again, but yeah.

Other than that looks good so far.

Ahm... yeah, thanks.

Let me rephrase: The Order hasn't been around for 45 years. There's a reason the current command structure is relatively young compared to everyone else, but that'd a different discussion. Battleship Thebes was constructed and nearly completed during the Battle of Minor in 819 AS, where it then helped the evacation that led to it being stuck in drydock at the current time.. Anyone who was born into the Order would right now be early 20s at the eldest, probably 21 as of right now. Sorry, but the Order is just not old enough to have anyone over 21 be born into it.

Damn... I will just remove this birthday line.

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Any questions or concerns about Bowex), just send me a private message.

[Jeremy Hunter]

Not sure when Order actually touched down upon it, but knowledge/existence of Akabat has been for 4 years (that's how long it's been in the mod).

Bout 4ish years, my bad. I forget the time line half the time. Con of being gone for two years.

Yeah, uh, feedback about the story.

The Order hasn't been on Akabat for 45 years so there's no way Monsek could have been born on said planet - well moon - as in actuality the current Order wasn't even on Toledo for 45. More like 15 years on Toledo and like 10ish or less years on Akabat currently. Or like three. I have to check the actual time line again, but yeah.

Other than that looks good so far.

Ahm... yeah, thanks.

Let me rephrase: The Order hasn't been around for 45 years. There's a reason the current command structure is relatively young compared to everyone else, but that'd a different discussion. Battleship Thebes was constructed and nearly completed during the Battle of Minor in 819 AS, where it then helped the evacation that led to it being stuck in drydock at the current time.. Anyone who was born into the Order would right now be early 20s at the eldest, probably 21 as of right now. Sorry, but the Order is just not old enough to have anyone over 21 be born into it.

Damn... I will just remove this birthday line.

Unfortunately it's the easiest current solution. The Order's one of the youngest "canon" factions by Lore, which make it near impossible to have a character born into it.

Sorry

[Mr.Badger]

Not sure when Order actually touched down upon it, but knowledge/existence of Akabat has been for 4 years (that's how long it's been in the mod).

Bout 4ish years, my bad. I forget the time line half the time. Con of being gone for two years.

Yeah, uh, feedback about the story.

The Order hasn't been on Akabat for 45 years so there's no way Monsek could have been born on said planet - well moon - as in actuality the current Order wasn't even on Toledo for 45. More like 15 years on Toledo and like 10ish or less years on Akabat currently. Or like three. I have to check the actual time line again, but yeah.

Other than that looks good so far.

Ahm... yeah, thanks.

Let me rephrase: The Order hasn't been around for 45 years. There's a reason the current command structure is relatively young compared to everyone else, but that'd a different discussion. Battleship Thebes was constructed and nearly completed during the Battle of Minor in 819 AS, where it then helped the evacation that led to it being stuck in drydock at the current time.. Anyone who was born into the Order would right now be early 20s at the eldest, probably 21 as of right now. Sorry, but the Order is just not old enough to have anyone over 21 be born into it.

Damn... I will just remove this birthday line.

Unfortunately it's the easiest current solution. The Order's one of the youngest "canon" factions by Lore, which make it near impossible to have a character born into it.

Sorry

No problem, anyway, thanks for the feedback

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Any questions or concerns about Bowex), just send me a private message.