Shaggy Character Feedback

[Divine]

I am aware about my character of Cara Kendall, but thank you. I have alot going on in real life at the moment, as I have said numerous times, my mum is in and out of hospital all over christmas.

For that you've got a lot of time to argue with Wesker instead of using that time to actually keep your character-list you want us to comment on actual.
But to leave you some feedback: I've encountered Cara today and from the time that char was around, I was hardly able to get any idea what she'd be like, contrary to the few lines Hussaini had spoken. She seems to lack any outstanding character trait that makes her instantly recognizable, but I'll see about what truth that holds should I encounter her more often. You were also gone when the action started to hit the ground, which is weird.

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[Thunderer]

Anne-Marie, Alice-Marie, Anna Heinrich and Nicole Brennan are actually long lost twin sisters?

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[Foxglove]

Maybe unrelated to you: But I like the layout of the feeback thread. Tables are nice.

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[Kauket]

Your SRP is highly inconsistant which I have various questions for it's consistancies - most of which still continue up to this day due to the holes in the RP, which I waited on to see if they were ever filled in.

[SRP process]

-Why did they 'defect'? How is it being maintained?

-How did they leave? They were only a Paladin, and leaving with a Bullhead just because they said so, won't work at all, especially after the incident of the Eidolon Wraith. Security would be insanely high, and the Core are known for their loyalty when looking up to people.

-Why is RP entry for your Bullhead so similar to mine? (even copying the engine?! Which is outdated, it would be a lot slower, inefficient. ) A blatant copy of style and writing. Like come on! You literally CP the words I used! ([number]x [MANUFACTURE NUMBER] "name" [WEAPON TYPE] + Crew ranks - even the words were taken!) Scratch similar - why did you steal my way of RP?

-What's the point of going to Rheinland? What's the goal? What do they achieve with that? Why do they need a Bullhead for that?

-Why are they infested? (Yes, I know they helped out with the whole Alaska thing, as does the Order which brings a massive why and how to the next one. ) What purpose does it bring to the character?

-Why is the SRP already Order IFF'd without being remotely affiliated with them? Why would the Order let Rosalina near them when they're AWARE that she's infested? They were there for the Coronado mess, they were in contact with LN.

-Who repaired it? Not gave the shipyard access - but fully repaired and supplied with resources?

[RP Process]

-How did you get the Rheinland technology? Engines just simply aren't "dismounted" and then hauled, then "mounted" - same with the Weapons. Same with the Core turrets, you don't just 'unmount it' - as I watched you do so in Omicron Kappa. (And yes, I know, the Wilde provided it as a trade. But that still doesn't dismiss it. You don't simply la-de-la-haul parts, you pack it up, dismantle it. )

-Who's housing the refit? Who was engineering the equipment to come off?

-Why was there no powergrid adaption to the weapons? How do they know the internal specifics of the Bullhead?

-Why was Romanov in a coma then wakes up randomly pregnant with no partner or any occurance of a rape scenario (the character doesn't emotionally show it or even noted to their companions)?

-Nomads are referred to as Aliens. Why? If she was infested - she IS the alien in a meaty vehicle. Poor wording.


-2x bonus round. Why the hell is it Order?

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This character is so inconsistant and so bad in general when it comes down to the character, story and involved parties, that it's painfully obvious that there are oorpdeals to further the RP by coincidentally 'ignoring' certain elements about the environment and the character history which is already acknowledged by the community and other official factions. I don't get how this was ever approved. It's a mess. It's also just... just so, lacking. Not to mention the stealing of content, that's /really/ bad, especially for an SRP'd character which is supposed to maintain higher standards of RP.

Please reconsider your roleplay, and please actually write your own content.

[Shaggy]

@"Auzari" Thank you for your feedback,

You already know the answer to most of these as I have explained them to you before so the answer you are getting is "Thank you for your feedback." have a nice day.

[Kauket]

That's fine. It's okay if you don't have an actual answer for any of these queries.

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[Shaggy]

That's fine. It's okay if you don't have an actual answer.

You know the answer to all of these questions, so there is no need to ask them? You are being picky and worrying about someone else's roleplay instead of you own so if you do not mind, I have things to do.

[Aristaan]

@Shaggy Y'know, I'm gonna call you out on this one. I'd like to see it justified. You have so much room for creativity, yet it falls in the same line as existing SRP's. Yes the ways of obtaining a ship are limited, but I can see where @"Auzari" is coming from. Please explain.

[Kauket]

I don't, but it's clear to me that you don't either.


Oh well. Have fun.

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[Shaggy]

@Shaggy Y'know, I'm gonna call you out on this one. I'd like to see it justified. You have so much room for creativity, yet it falls in the same line as existing SRP's. Yes the ways of obtaining a ship are limited, but I can see where @"Auzari" is coming from. Please explain.

@Auzari already knows the answers to all of these questions, not only that but I also know what you are all trying to do. So again I have things to do.